I like your poem.
Beloved friend...please do not be upset with me, but... the "hating", could have been..."eating"?????
Being bilingual myself.....I am now making "mistakes" in both languages. Anyway....keep writing.
Love
svghafiz
it all depends what your preferences are: you like 'eating' and me, a poet-author, knows more what ruin can other's hating can bring to a person. thank you for the permission to keep on writing. love, is that 'a habibi'? Ivan Petryshyn
